The Storm
His voice rose angrily above the storm and she cringed at his words.
Outside, thunder flashed across the sky, wind lashed against the trees, twisting and tormenting them.
He noticed her tears and felt sudden remorse.
Sorry, he whispered, holding her tentatively.
Slowly the storm abated, the wind blew gently, as if caressing the trees.
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October 12, 2010 1:03:02 pmThank you Abha !
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October 12, 2010 12:24:06 pm
quiet a melodrama like in Bollywood
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October 12, 2010 1:04:01 pm
yeah bollywood has a lot of stormy scenes doesnt it
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October 12, 2010 12:38:58 pm
Painted a very vivid picture in just 55 words! Raging storm, raging emotions. Excellent.
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October 12, 2010 1:04:32 pm
Thanks Pallavi. Glad you enjoyed it !
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October 13, 2010 8:43:40 am
Welcome to Ginger chai. Nice to have u here. Nice 55 fic.
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October 13, 2010 9:19:18 am
thanks Mani. Its a pleasure to be a part of Ginger Chai !
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October 13, 2010 10:49:23 am
Loved the swaying of emotions
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October 13, 2010 12:55:44 pm
Thank you Swaram !
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December 01, 2010 11:49:20 am
Short and meaningful…nice
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August 19, 2011 5:43:11 pm
words speak!!!
really
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HI Ruchika…. a crisp yet gentle 55 er:) Liked it!