Saturday 18th May 2013,

The Pangs of Separation

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55 F The Pangs of Separation

She could feel her heart beating faster,

The pangs of separation had begun to rise within,

When she felt its effect on her,

She let herself free to get immersed in what gave her pleasure like love of her lover would,

It was pitter patter of raindrops that soaked her skin and touched her soul!

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7 Comments

  • chatterbox
    September 12, 2010 11:35:22 am

    Very nice :)

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  • chatterbox
    September 12, 2010 11:35:54 am

    Very nice one Pallavi :)

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    • Pallavi
      September 13, 2010 12:19:53 pm

      Hey there, Thanks, happy to know that you liked it!

      Reply
  • Shas
    September 12, 2010 3:47:30 pm

    Beautiful :)

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    • Pallavi
      September 13, 2010 12:20:18 pm

      Thankyew Shas :)

      Reply
  • Mani
    September 15, 2010 11:51:31 pm

    Thanks for writing for Ginger chai. A simple yet sweet fiftyfiver.

    Reply
  • Locomente
    April 23, 2013 10:31:55 am

    Poetic!

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