First Blood
She was scared.
He came close to her, she felt the puncture wound, he started taking in her blood.
She was aghast, but his handsome face eased her pain.
She was prepared to face the outcome of this unavoidable ritual.
He looked deep into her eyes, said “come tomorrow to collect your blood test results”.
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21 Comments
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August 29, 2010 10:55:38 am
Oh! I like the caricature of u! (:chic:)
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August 31, 2010 7:03:23 pm
hehe thanks
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August 29, 2010 1:01:32 pm
I could predict the ending but it was a good write nonetheless.
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August 31, 2010 7:06:30 pm ( my bloody trick didnt work
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August 29, 2010 5:11:43 pm
Ha ha! I didn’t see that coming. Seemed more like a vampire or something of the sort
I think the ‘aghast’ word made it sound eerie. Good 55-er.-
August 31, 2010 7:11:07 pm
Thanks
should’ve used the name edward as well na
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August 29, 2010 6:37:47 pm
Nice one, unexpected turn!
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August 31, 2010 7:12:32 pm
thanks
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August 29, 2010 8:41:22 pm
Simple, true, funny. Innovative too.
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August 31, 2010 7:57:36 pm
thank you
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August 30, 2010 5:52:21 pm
haha… that was brilliant
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August 31, 2010 8:00:41 pm
hehe thanks
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August 30, 2010 9:59:35 pm
This was very powerful and hit me sharp in the end! Nice post!
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August 31, 2010 8:08:56 pm
thanks
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August 31, 2010 4:52:28 am
ah ha!
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August 31, 2010 9:13:22 am
Aha! Isn’t it?
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August 31, 2010 8:03:27 pm
aha aha
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September 01, 2010 8:22:08 am
Aha Aha aha!
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September 01, 2010 10:17:32 am
Aha ha ha ha !(:rotfl:)
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September 29, 2012 12:12:14 pm
nice twist !
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