First Blood

August 29, 2010
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She was scared.

He came close to her, she felt the puncture wound, he started taking in her blood.

She was aghast, but his handsome face eased her pain.

She was prepared to face the outcome of this unavoidable ritual.

He looked deep into her eyes, said “come tomorrow to collect your blood test results”.

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 First Blood

Gayatri

She is a freelance graphic designer who also loves writing and sketching who gave a completely new perspective to blogging with her caricatures and graphics as well as writings .

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20 Responses to First Blood

  1. Anney on August 29, 2010 at 10:52 am

    I saw that coming! (:evilgrin:) G

    • Anney on August 29, 2010 at 10:55 am

      Oh! I like the caricature of u! (:chic:)

  2. Samadrita on August 29, 2010 at 1:01 pm

    I could predict the ending but it was a good write nonetheless. :)

    • gayatri on August 31, 2010 at 7:06 pm

      :-( ( my bloody trick didnt work :-D

  3. pallavi on August 29, 2010 at 5:11 pm

    Ha ha! I didn’t see that coming. Seemed more like a vampire or something of the sort :-) I think the ‘aghast’ word made it sound eerie. Good 55-er.

    • gayatri on August 31, 2010 at 7:11 pm

      Thanks :-) should’ve used the name edward as well na :-D

  4. S.R.Ayyangar on August 29, 2010 at 6:37 pm

    Nice one, unexpected turn!

  5. Vishal Raj on August 29, 2010 at 8:41 pm

    Simple, true, funny. Innovative too.

  6. Pranjal on August 30, 2010 at 5:52 pm

    haha… that was brilliant :)

  7. Karan Agrawal on August 30, 2010 at 9:59 pm

    This was very powerful and hit me sharp in the end! Nice post! ;)

  8. Usha on August 31, 2010 at 4:52 am

    ah ha!

    • Mani padma on August 31, 2010 at 9:13 am

      Aha! Isn’t it? :)

      • gayatri on August 31, 2010 at 8:03 pm

        aha aha

        • Lakshmi Rajan on September 1, 2010 at 8:22 am

          Aha Aha aha! :-P

          • Anney on September 1, 2010 at 10:17 am

            Aha ha ha ha !(:rotfl:)

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