Another adult annihilated!
Azaad and Aman altercated at aunt Annie’s abode.
Afterwards, Aman absconded.
Aunt Annie arrived and asked Azaad about Aman.
Azaad answered, ‘am ain’t aware’.
Aunt asked again.
Azaad answered, ‘an alligator ate Aman’.
Aunt, agitated, averred, ‘a$$@@@@’.
Azaad answered, ‘abuse again and…’
Aunt, annoyed, aimed an axe at Azaad’s abdomen.
‘Aaaaaaaaahhhh… ‘
Editors note: I hope readers found the unique aspect of this this 55 fiction format story. You didnt? No I am not talking about the 55 F format here but the way the story is constructed. Have a re-look. All the words starts with “A”. This A post comes from Kshitj and believe it or not, this is his first attempt on 55F. What a wordplay sirji!
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July 30, 2010 1:37:53 pmThank you Usha. You comment is U-wesome!
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July 29, 2010 8:34:08 am
good one Kshitij bhaiya…. F55 is already a tough thing to write, on top of that, you write one with all 55 words starting with the letter A…. really commendable….
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July 30, 2010 1:38:45 pm
Hmmmm… yaha bhi tum, vaha bhi tum… kab mukti milegi?
Thanks ;p
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July 29, 2010 10:33:45 am
A-mazing , A-wesome, A-ha! :evilgrin:
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July 30, 2010 1:39:20 pm
Thank u thank u thank u, far too kind!
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July 29, 2010 8:21:50 pm
Main na kehta tha, Aapme Atulya Adhikhsamta hai.
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July 30, 2010 1:40:36 pm
Oho… aap phir se start…
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<>Thank you P.
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July 30, 2010 4:51:34 pm
Main band kub huwa tha jo fir se start hoonga.
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July 29, 2010 10:29:26 pm
Awesome, amazing and awe-inspiring :evilgrin:
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July 30, 2010 1:42:12 pm
Hmmm.. Mudassir.. thank you.
Your name reminds me of an old friend.. he used to be a great bowler… a good competitor… colony cricket mei.. we used to call him muddi…
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July 30, 2010 7:58:51 am
Ooh la la! Ati Uttam!
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July 30, 2010 1:43:29 pm
thanks LaafatLife. I would rather Laugh IN Life…
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July 30, 2010 10:44:46 am
Hi kshitij! Don’t measure appreciation by statistics. Replicating your post is tough and you know it and so does all. You have done a great job so just chill. And reply to the comments, or else I will be forced to write a 55 fic- another blogger annihilated
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July 30, 2010 1:44:10 pm
Tumhara comment padhke hi reply kar raha hoon… shaanti rakho!
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July 30, 2010 11:40:03 am
[...] was inspired after reading this inspiring story of Mr. L Subramani (told in his own words), and this 55-er on Ginger Chai. Check them [...]
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July 30, 2010 1:44:56 pm
Dude… I am not educated enough to decode this comment of yours..
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July 30, 2010 1:50:43 pm
@ all – I think the post is probably not communicating one thing – I wanted to imply that Aunt Annie had killed Aman as well… and which is why I had the title ‘Another Adult Annihilated’… But logic says – if I need to explain what I meant… means the post needs a slight tweak
Anyways, I thank you all for liking something I’d call stupid… but good fun @ GC – you are doing such a great job. Going along with your usual business and simultaneously giving visibility to guests like me. The BPL has been a really good platform as well. I commend the effort you have been putting it. At the same time, I’d like to say there is still a lot of scope of improvement.. innovation.. and what not! Continue persisting, I say. Keep coming with new ideas… and never be scared to experiment.
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July 30, 2010 4:58:09 pm
Aisi baaat nahi hai koi nahi samjha, par kya hai na, aapka style logo ko story se zyaada pasand aa gaya.
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July 30, 2010 6:00:05 pm
For once I agree with u. @kshitij awww that was so sweet of u. Bas keep on giving ur feedback
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July 12, 2011 9:51:03 am
hahaha
simply genious
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