Thanks Anney…:D
Wow!!!! I was moved. I wanted to read more ….. I truly did
ha ha…:D thanks… I will try to publish one!!!
Like the changing time line but storyline is not exciting enough.
Next time I will create the story line…:D
I have read it before, I think on Sid’s blog itself.. I liked it then too
Thanks Debbie…but its not published on my blog… it was published long back in some other blog and was later removed long back…:D
Thanks Debosmita. That is an interesting piece of information. Errr…. Sid! ahem We need to talk! :pissedoff:
Liked the concept. The story. The beginning. The pace and the build up was perfect. But I felt the climax was weak! As soon as 1 read the words “narrow” it was quite evident what would happen next. And for a person so brilliant (Shastri) its an average trick to bring the king to a secluded place.
I feel if the climax was more interesting and justifying for Shastri’s intelligence it would have been an EXCELLENT story which could be adapted into a movie!!
Shastri had the primitive intelligence, that is the point I wanted to emphasize in the whole story. Building a flood gate was a finesse warfare but ambushing was the most primitive form of warfare.
The climax was not necessary a climax, it was simply clashes between primitive war form and fine art form, they say even a small pawn can bring down an empire and this was the whole point.
Thanks for great comment.
I liked the story, but don’t know why I feel that I have read it before in Sidoscope.
Wow another one! ..Grrrrrr SID WHERE ARE YOU? :reallypissed:
Abhey gadhe it was never on sidoscope… i have a archives posted check karo…afwa mat failao…X(
Wow..intense..like a thriller movie…loved the ending..poetic justice perhaps? :smirk:
Thanks…
whichever justice it was… it was long overdue…:D
nice concept!
Thank you…:)
Sid, run…mani is out with the GC Balan and it had your name on it!!!!
(:rotfl:)
it is a nice story… but i think i could predict the ending when read the initial lines… however.. a nice once
I see Christopher Nolan has inspired many
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Sid, I felt like I just saw a movie….welcome to GC