Free Fall

June 6, 2010
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The gorge looked breathtakingly beautiful from the precarious edge of the rock.

A tingling sensation ran through his spine.

Vodka or Vertigo ?

His brain stopped registering.

Soon he was plummeting earthwards.

A deep vertical fall. Fear gripped him.

Insane rush of blood flooded his body.

An altered state of consciousness.

Slowly his eyes closed. A sharp pain slashed his chest.

Thud.

One long drop and stop.

His friends watched in horror.

He had never watched a 3D movie before.

Free Fall

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20 Responses to Free Fall

  1. chatterbox on June 6, 2010 at 11:31 am

    Wow! what a twist :)
    My mind knew it from the start that I was heading for a twist, but it would end this way was totally unexpected :)

    Reply
    • tikulicious on June 6, 2010 at 1:22 pm

      Thanks CB I am into dark mood these days and the fiction is just flowing by itself … strange but true. Glad you liked it. This my first post here. Thank you commenting and appreciating .
      Cheers!!

      Reply
  2. pal on June 6, 2010 at 1:44 pm

    That was AWESOME!!! Didn’t see that coming at all!!!!

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    • tikulicious on June 7, 2010 at 9:11 am

      Thanks Pal :) discovering short fiction :blush:

      Reply
  3. magiceye on June 6, 2010 at 2:04 pm

    wow! thrilling!

    Reply
  4. Monika on June 6, 2010 at 2:04 pm

    too good tiku loved this one :D

    Reply
    • tikulicious on June 7, 2010 at 9:12 am

      Thank you Monika .Am glad it is appreciated

      Reply
  5. Lazy Pineapple on June 6, 2010 at 4:00 pm

    a thrilling post with a tinge of humour..Loved the ending…

    Reply
    • tikulicious on June 7, 2010 at 9:13 am

      LP Humor and Tragedy both go together. Don’t they :) ?

      Reply
  6. Alka on June 6, 2010 at 8:58 pm

    Yippie! new face in GC :inlove: :silly: and I like your name as well as this funny little story

    Reply
    • tikulicious on June 7, 2010 at 9:14 am

      :inlove: :blush: Thank you and yes it is a pleasure to be part of GC :)

      Reply
  7. Neha on June 7, 2010 at 8:38 am

    amazing Tikuli..watta twist..loved it re :)

    Reply
  8. Mani padma on June 7, 2010 at 8:49 am

    Hey Tikuli. Truly Tikulicious take it was. Welcome to GC. :-)

    Reply
    • tikulicious on June 7, 2010 at 9:15 am

      Thanks Mani , It is an honor to be here.

      Reply
  9. Rumya on June 7, 2010 at 1:32 pm

    Tikuli, you went Bungee Jumping recently?? That seems to be the inspiration for that post!! Amazing description of a free fall!! :rotfl: Unexpected Twist at the end!! :cute:

    Reply
  10. Shilpa on June 7, 2010 at 2:41 pm

    :) Can imagine the thrill of a 3D … Good one!!!

    Reply
  11. gayatri on June 8, 2010 at 12:32 pm

    yaaay! great post!

    Reply
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