Little Tanmay was amazed at the beautiful thing he saw- for the first time.
He was on a field trip.
Though they were warned against crossing the infringement line, his little hands still sought the butterfly.
Time travel expedition from circa 2157 to 1990 had its first casualty.
Tanmay was lost in time forever
This 55 fiction format story is written by Mani Padma.
For more about 55 fiction click here
Footnote- Do u want this future for your children? Save earth. Do your bit for the environment.
P.S: inspired from the movie – the butterfly effect
The butterfly theory: A small differences in the initial condition of a dynamical system may produce large variations in the long term behavior of the system. For more info click here
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Absolutely superb!! Really like the way you’ve conveyed the message.
Wow!!! Disturbingly wonderful (if there is any such thing!) Wow again
Excellent!!
It is quite disturbing to imagine what way we are headed in the future
Bizarre story narrated well
and that is quite possible…
Hey Arif, Ritu, LP, CB thanks for appreciating it.
Thought Provoking….
I know. Unfortunately we are already well in the realm when simple creatures of the world are disappearing.
Hi Shilpa, hello Sir P. Well it is something we need to think about. I agree with you Sir Pumpkin
did not understand…o_O
Now you do i hope
Very creative
What I did not understand was, if Tanmay has travelled back in time to 1990, then why was there an ‘infringement line’? Anyway, it was an excellent concept with really good narration!
And all that in just 55 words! That was spectacular
Thanks Pal. Well infringement line is jus an imaginary concept which demarcates the two time… Ummm…frames i suppose. N any interference may result in fatal consequences.
Brilliant in 55 words
I first came to know about 55F here in GC and mani you have managed max impact in those few words :beauty:
Hey Alka! Thanks! Your encorouging comments really make our day.
great..
use those 55 words ina very beautiful way