A sad but gripping story 
Very well written Gayatri
Cheers!!
I like the way you write. Very compelling
u know, i love this story. a nice twist in the end, but more so coz of the rhymes in the sentences.. lovely. kudos for such a compelling write!
Thanks Anney, Chatterbox and Girl
and thanks Leo
Lovely Gayatri. Simply lovely.Watch out world . Here comes GC’s resident poet.
Thanks Mani
sounds like resident evil
A poem? Prose? Oh wait… this is two in one. lovely style and enjoyed the story in a novel format
wanted it to sound dramatic, hence
cool… somethings can’t be cured
… but awesome presentation gayatri
yeah, so true. thanks
Loved this…
especially the twist in the end
thank you
wow that was interesting….:D
The poem was very good. The story in it is interesting.
nice one!liked the ending specially “the beast in their family was awake again”
It’s like one of those Clint Eastwood’s pessimistic movies
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It was like watching a movie…well done G.