Ambush – 55 Fiction

March 17, 2010
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ambush 225x300 Ambush 55 FictionHe had reached the enemy camp.

His palms were sweating. He had no backup.

They were all dead.

It was no or never!

He was armed to his teeth.

He made a swift move into the camp. He turned the corner.

And his computer crashed. He had to get a better computer to continue this game.

This  55 fiction format story is written by Sir Pumpkin Longshanks.

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Ambush 55 Fiction

Sir Pumpkin Longshanks

The name may sound funny and weird and it spills over his character too. He prefers to keep his identity secret and we respect his choice. Thanks to a moment of “what an idea, sirji” we have him on-board our panel and don’t ask me more about the idea, it is our kitchen secret but his writings are here to enthrall you.

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11 Responses to Ambush – 55 Fiction

  1. chatterbox on March 17, 2010 at 3:49 pm

    Fantastic :)

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  2. Sanchit Goyal on March 17, 2010 at 11:59 pm

    Good 1 !!!!

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  3. Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky on March 18, 2010 at 11:57 am

    LOL :laugh:

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  4. Pal on March 18, 2010 at 1:37 pm

    ROFL!! Excellent!!

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  5. chetan on March 20, 2010 at 5:55 pm

    great..
    made me laugh

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  6. chatterbox on March 22, 2010 at 10:55 am

    Wonderful!!

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    • chatterbox on March 23, 2010 at 5:10 am

      I posted a second reply as it wasn’t published amongst others, I am glad that at both times I read it,I found this piece awesome :D

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      • Lakshmi Rajan on March 23, 2010 at 11:24 pm

        The filter acted funny and your earlier comment got pushed into different folder. Luckily i noticed it sitting over there and pushed it back over here :-D

        Reply
  7. Dhiman on March 22, 2010 at 2:40 pm

    Ooops a computer game :-D :laugh: :-) )

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    • Pumpkin Longshanks on April 12, 2010 at 5:21 pm

      How dare you sir! :P A computer ‘game’?!?!??! It is called a ‘first player shooter’… its not a game!!!! :D

      Reply
  8. Gyanban on June 13, 2010 at 10:43 am

    small typo…and a good story.

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