What is Wrong?

January 19, 2010
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dilema thumb What is Wrong? He checked again but there was nothing.

He was restless. He could not sleep nor did he feel hungry.

The next day there was Still nothing.

He was beginning to panic.

His wife mutely observed him Concern on her face.

24 hrs after his blog post,  there was still no comments. Was he losing sheen?

This  55 fiction format story is written by Mani Padma.

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 What is Wrong?

Mani Padma

She is a Doctor by profession , working in Delhi. Loves traveling, mind games and playing with words… And also the chief-co brewer of GingerChai. She is the chief brewer of some of the interesting categories you see in GingerChai.Follow @manishalsam

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16 Responses to What is Wrong?

  1. Lucky on January 19, 2010 at 9:45 am

    fantaaaastic!!!!!

  2. Ambi on January 19, 2010 at 11:05 am

    Looks like a serious case of blog addiction!

    Who is it?

    • Mani on January 23, 2010 at 12:08 pm

      Can be anyone! You me we? :-)

  3. sharat on January 19, 2010 at 11:42 am

    blog post karne ki chinta karein, comments ki nahin….if in doubt read LR’s articles on bloggig and be a Rancho Blogger

  4. shilpa on January 19, 2010 at 2:57 pm

    Awesome… blog addiction on the rise. :P

  5. Sanchit Goyal on January 19, 2010 at 4:10 pm

    Hillarious!! you nailed it!!

  6. Alka on January 19, 2010 at 6:45 pm

    ROFL.

    This is the funniest 55F that a blogger can write! Ousome! Brilliant mani!

  7. Vidya Sury on January 19, 2010 at 6:49 pm

    Very neat. Loved it. :-)

  8. mahesh kalaal on January 19, 2010 at 11:35 pm

    Fantabulous…….

  9. chatterbox on January 20, 2010 at 1:28 am

    Simply superb :)

    Keep up the good work!!

  10. Bharathi on January 20, 2010 at 8:25 am

    i liked it

  11. chetan on January 22, 2010 at 4:48 pm

    gr8
    this might have happened with everyone, at some time of their blogging

    • Mani on January 23, 2010 at 12:13 pm

      Bingo!

  12. Pramathesh B on January 22, 2010 at 7:20 pm

    Hit hai ji.

  13. Mani on January 23, 2010 at 12:15 pm

    thanks friends! glad you really liked it. thanks for commenting. now i can eat in peace. ;-)

  14. Vishal Raj on December 15, 2010 at 6:11 pm

    A blast of laughter after reading the last line.(no offence)

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