I do, just not you

November 18, 2009
By Usha Amudan

I-dp Usha Amudhan’s  first attempt at 55 Fiction.

They were a second away from being declared man and wife.

His beautiful bride was beaming. He looked away, turning his gaze to his best man. His sister was getting married and his face suggested depression and loss.

He decided then.

"I Ronald Phillips, take Robert Adams to be my wife".

"My brother?" Rita exclaimed.

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16 Responses to “ I do, just not you ”

  1. mani padma on November 18, 2009 at 11:58 am

    You too? Just not me? No. not that, I meant about your foray into 55 ficion. Good attempt.Smile

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  2. Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky on November 18, 2009 at 11:59 am

    Shock

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  3. sharat on November 18, 2009 at 3:21 pm

    is it a double meaning story….or its means the same as i am thinking?

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    • Ambi on November 18, 2009 at 3:45 pm

      Lol!!

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  4. Aneet on November 18, 2009 at 5:14 pm

    I am more for Lesbian imagery than gay although I must say that both groups of homosexuals have an extremely suave sartorial sense!

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  5. Mani padma on November 18, 2009 at 6:01 pm

    @aneet. My my ! You do seem to have a first hand knowledge about many things.Smile

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    • Aneet on November 18, 2009 at 7:08 pm

      I happen to have friends in all circles of life! I’m well connected!

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  6. Aneet on November 18, 2009 at 7:32 pm

    So Ronald is bi? Interesting… too bad Rita didn’t know all along.. Wink

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  7. Lakshmi Rajan on November 18, 2009 at 7:44 pm

    Am i witnessing skeletons in the closet err comment box Wink

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    • Aneet on November 18, 2009 at 8:23 pm

      “Everyone has skeletons in their closet. Some people have complete cemeteries with bats and owls flying around” TM(2009)Aneet

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  8. Ambi on November 19, 2009 at 9:50 am

    From what I read again, it looks like she was aware her husband was bi, but is surprised that it was with her own brother.

    Afterthought:

    Why am I even analyzing this? *sigh*

    Need to get back to work on my next article.

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    • sharat on November 19, 2009 at 3:49 pm

      may I eply to your poser that why u r analysing this – some habits are hard to leave…Wink

      @LR – this may be a 55 ficreality?

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      • Ambi on November 20, 2009 at 9:34 am

        *sigh*

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        • sharat on November 20, 2009 at 10:22 am

          aaoooo

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  9. Chatterbox on November 19, 2009 at 5:24 pm

    That was a wonderful 55-fiction with a big twist.

    Keep up the good work.

    Cheers!!

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  10. Mandeep on November 24, 2009 at 9:28 pm

    Well written and well concluded!! It took a while to understand the concept.

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