Usha Amudhan’s first attempt at 55 Fiction.
They were a second away from being declared man and wife.
His beautiful bride was beaming. He looked away, turning his gaze to his best man. His sister was getting married and his face suggested depression and loss.
He decided then.
"I Ronald Phillips, take Robert Adams to be my wife".
"My brother?" Rita exclaimed.
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You too? Just not me? No. not that, I meant about your foray into 55 ficion. Good attempt.
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is it a double meaning story….or its means the same as i am thinking?
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Lol!!
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I am more for Lesbian imagery than gay although I must say that both groups of homosexuals have an extremely suave sartorial sense!
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@aneet. My my ! You do seem to have a first hand knowledge about many things.
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I happen to have friends in all circles of life! I’m well connected!
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So Ronald is bi? Interesting… too bad Rita didn’t know all along..
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Am i witnessing skeletons in the closet err comment box
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“Everyone has skeletons in their closet. Some people have complete cemeteries with bats and owls flying around” TM(2009)Aneet
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From what I read again, it looks like she was aware her husband was bi, but is surprised that it was with her own brother.
Afterthought:
Why am I even analyzing this? *sigh*
Need to get back to work on my next article.
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may I eply to your poser that why u r analysing this – some habits are hard to leave…
@LR – this may be a 55 ficreality?
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*sigh*
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aaoooo
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That was a wonderful 55-fiction with a big twist.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers!!
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Well written and well concluded!! It took a while to understand the concept.
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