A Dream…

September 16, 2009
By Lakshmi Rajan

dream 

The building stood tall and proud.

He looked at it with satisfaction and content.

Malls, hotels, clubs his sweat has laced the dreams.

Since childhood , he wanted to be an architect and give a good life to his siblings.

Alas ! Poverty turned him into a daily laborer like his parents.

This story is a 55 fiction format.

For more about 55 fiction click here

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12 Responses to “ A Dream… ”

  1. Shruti on September 16, 2009 at 11:05 am

    hey, you are bitten by that 55-fiction bug eh?!
    Great!
    Beautiful :)

    Keep Smiling!

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  2. RSV on September 16, 2009 at 1:32 pm

    poverty is really a curse to the society…it shatters the dreams of hundreds of such people….you explained it well!!

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  3. mani padma on September 16, 2009 at 1:46 pm

    A poignant one! Nice,A refreshing change from my dark ones.

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  4. Megan "JoyGirl!" Bord on September 16, 2009 at 6:28 pm

    Oh that’s so cool! I hadn’t heard of 55 fiction before, and love what you created in that vein. I really like what I’ve seen so far on this blog!

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  5. Aneet on September 16, 2009 at 8:18 pm

    ‘55 fiction’ is quite interesting! Must make mental note to dabble in this pool sometime!

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  6. Lakshmi Rajan on September 16, 2009 at 10:06 pm

    @ Shruti

    Thanks.

    @ RSV , Mani

    Poverty is indeed a curse that pushes down the dreams of many people..

    @ Megan

    Thanks for the hearty appreciation !

    @ Aneet

    So hopefully we will see your 55F in GingerChai soon :)

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  7. Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky on September 17, 2009 at 10:31 am

    There is an award waiting for you in my blog.

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  8. Dhiman on September 17, 2009 at 11:40 am

    That one was a with a very unpredictable ending…quite nicely written

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  9. sharat on September 17, 2009 at 12:25 pm

    aah! ur’s 55 are becoming amazingly refreshingly provocative !!!loving it…wants’ morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre!!!

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  10. sharat on September 17, 2009 at 12:36 pm

    can this be called a 55 fiction? -

    My friend Harish had a fight with his wife. ‘How was it settled?’ I asked.
    “she kneeled down before me”-”and assured me that i’ll be safe”…
    Harish was lying beneath the bed !!!

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  11. Lakshmi Rajan on September 17, 2009 at 12:42 pm

    @ Dhiman:
    Thanks ! :)

    @ Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky:
    :) juz checked it.. tx

    @ sharat:

    Lol … that was a funny 55 ! Made my day with that one ! Can’t stop laughing :D

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  12. Neelima on September 22, 2009 at 8:16 am

    Nice.. the ending was the best. :)

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