Love is Blind

September 3, 2009
By Mani Padma

 

girl in window

He left, satisfied only after she came to the window.

When life was about to defeat him, she had appeared at the window, her eyes filled with innocence and hope, miraculously giving him a fresh lease of life. Now he sought her eyes daily for sustenance.

Little did he know that her eyes saw nothing.

This  55 fiction format story is written by Mani Padma.

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17 Responses to “ Love is Blind ”

  1. Mandeep on September 3, 2009 at 9:13 am

    Another punch from Mani! You have returned! why don’t you publish collection of such stunning stories.

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  2. sharat on September 3, 2009 at 10:04 am

    touching

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  3. Bharathi on September 3, 2009 at 10:56 am

    Nice one. Particularly the picture added up to the mood well.

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  4. Mumbai Guy on September 3, 2009 at 4:41 pm

    Superb! I agree Bharathi…Picture added is up to the mood of story..

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  5. rocksea on September 3, 2009 at 4:46 pm

    but you supplemented it with a picture, and a picture is 1000+ words Wink

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  6. Lakshmi Rajan on September 3, 2009 at 5:44 pm

    This again is a short,wonderful story from Mani Padma , heavy weight emotions bundled in 55 words !

    The story was so inspiring that i wanted a good picture to compliment it and am happy I got the right one !

    Good writings are really inspiring !

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  7. chetan on September 3, 2009 at 6:38 pm

    Great, again a good one from you

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  8. E. Priya on September 3, 2009 at 8:07 pm

    Very thought-provoking! And the picture sums it up all! Excellent work dear!

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  9. Sourav on September 3, 2009 at 11:54 pm

    Touched, really !

    I didn’t leave too.

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  10. Shankar on September 4, 2009 at 2:13 pm

    wow.. very nice 55 about love….Love is always blind… I agree….And I would add Love is deaf too…..

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  11. Shankar on September 4, 2009 at 2:15 pm

    Hey I like this comment system….That like and dislike thing…. could you throw me some information about this comment forms…?? Is it a custom made one or any predefined comment forms from Internet??

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  12. mani padma on September 4, 2009 at 3:43 pm

    thanks alo for your encouraging comments. I will attempt some more in different flavours so as not to be repetetive. I hope I don’t let you all down.

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  13. Nikhil on September 6, 2009 at 10:52 am

    Great…

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  14. leafless on September 7, 2009 at 4:21 am

    Good stuff! The image sets the mood well.

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  15. Pins N Ashes on September 16, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    you said so much with so few words and a pic… crafty! I say

    …PNA

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  16. Shilpa Garg on September 17, 2009 at 12:04 pm

    Amazing!! Smile

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  17. Avada Kedavra on September 18, 2009 at 9:08 am

    That was very good one!

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