He left, satisfied only after she came to the window.
When life was about to defeat him, she had appeared at the window, her eyes filled with innocence and hope, miraculously giving him a fresh lease of life. Now he sought her eyes daily for sustenance.
Little did he know that her eyes saw nothing.
This 55 fiction format story is written by Mani Padma.
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Another punch from Mani! You have returned! why don’t you publish collection of such stunning stories.
touching
Nice one. Particularly the picture added up to the mood well.
Superb! I agree Bharathi…Picture added is up to the mood of story..
but you supplemented it with a picture, and a picture is 1000+ words
This again is a short,wonderful story from Mani Padma , heavy weight emotions bundled in 55 words !
The story was so inspiring that i wanted a good picture to compliment it and am happy I got the right one !
Good writings are really inspiring !
Great, again a good one from you
Very thought-provoking! And the picture sums it up all! Excellent work dear!
Touched, really !
I didn’t leave too.
wow.. very nice 55 about love….Love is always blind… I agree….And I would add Love is deaf too…..
Hey I like this comment system….That like and dislike thing…. could you throw me some information about this comment forms…?? Is it a custom made one or any predefined comment forms from Internet??
thanks alo for your encouraging comments. I will attempt some more in different flavours so as not to be repetetive. I hope I don’t let you all down.
Great…
Good stuff! The image sets the mood well.
you said so much with so few words and a pic… crafty! I say
…PNA
Amazing!!
That was very good one!
nice story told very simply.. in crisp words. i like it!