Arranged Marriage
She beamed with joy. He brimmed with smile. Guests congratulated them. Elders of the family were satisfied. Kids rejoiced in the party. Friends had fun.
Its celebration time. Marriage was solemnized.
First night.
Two strangers “made” love to “find” love.
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August 19, 2009 9:46:45 amha ha ….lol…very funy indeed……I like this one very much..
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August 19, 2009 10:13:29 am
@ Bharathi and Lucky:
Thanks guys !
Actually its a revealation for me that I could write short stories . I never had much fascination for short stories and had never attempted earlier. This sudden exposure to 55F seems to have triggered a latent short story ability in me
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August 19, 2009 11:23:15 pm
Wow!
The story seems to be the story of the beginning of every marriage (not necessarily of an arranged one). -
August 20, 2009 10:12:48 am
@ Shas
nice to see your comments ! But i feel it applies more for couple of arranged marriage , In love marriage , atleast there is love in air before marriage .. Ofcourse , love after marriage is different from love before marriage but then in arranged marriage its most of the times two strangers “finding love” post marriage . -
August 26, 2009 7:13:39 pm
hey, i was waiting for some suspense to unfold….
it ended with a happy note, and i liked it,it is as if u have writtena life of 2 people -
August 28, 2009 2:31:14 pm
I really liked the way you combined the conflict and resolution part. Now that is one thing to be appreciated.
But, still I would like to say that something was missing. I don’t know what actually.
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August 28, 2009 6:03:41 pm
@ Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky:
Thanks ! and about the missing part , If you could figure it out do let me know , am curious about it -
September 10, 2009 12:50:39 pm
why do people think they “make” love on the first night!!! does it happen all the time?? especially in arranged marriage?? i dont think so.. nice topic for discussion aint it??
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September 10, 2009 1:17:56 pm
@ Archana:
Ofcourse am not generalizing it. But one cannot deny a fact that most people “make” love before they “find” love in arranged marriage
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September 10, 2009 2:29:36 pm
@ Archana:
It is very confusing actually! Some say that love “happens”, others say love should be “made”. In this confusion they make mistakes
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great stoy pal. I can see maturity, question, philosophy, honesty everything in this story. I liked it.