She beamed with joy. He brimmed with smile. Guests congratulated them. Elders of the family were satisfied. Kids rejoiced in the party. Friends had fun.
Its celebration time. Marriage was solemnized.
First night.
Two strangers “made” love to “find” love.
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great stoy pal. I can see maturity, question, philosophy, honesty everything in this story. I liked it.
ha ha ….lol…very funy indeed……I like this one very much..
@ Bharathi and Lucky:
Thanks guys !
Actually its a revealation for me that I could write short stories . I never had much fascination for short stories and had never attempted earlier. This sudden exposure to 55F seems to have triggered a latent short story ability in me
Wow!
The story seems to be the story of the beginning of every marriage (not necessarily of an arranged one).
@ Shas
hey, i was waiting for some suspense to unfold….
it ended with a happy note, and i liked it,it is as if u have writtena life of 2 people
I really liked the way you combined the conflict and resolution part. Now that is one thing to be appreciated.
But, still I would like to say that something was missing. I don’t know what actually.
@ Mr. Pramathesh Borkotoky:
Thanks ! and about the missing part , If you could figure it out do let me know , am curious about it
why do people think they “make” love on the first night!!! does it happen all the time?? especially in arranged marriage?? i dont think so.. nice topic for discussion aint it??
@ Archana:
Ofcourse am not generalizing it. But one cannot deny a fact that most people “make” love before they “find” love in arranged marriage
@ Archana:
It is very confusing actually! Some say that love “happens”, others say love should be “made”. In this confusion they make mistakes